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Susan Foreman x Teen Reader - A Day at the Mall

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SusanWithRadio by TimeLadyJamie


This reader insert was requested by Superpunksuperfunk at Tumblr. Thank you for the request and I hope you enjoy it. I really enjoyed writing this and was thrilled to.

The bell just rang meaning school was over for the day. You looked to your best friend Susan Foreman as you both smiled in delight.

"Ready to go shopping?" You asked her with a smile.

Susan nodded "Yes, my grandfather won't mind. I told him I would be coming home late." She giggled a bit at this. Part of it was true, the other part was she was going to be studying at the school late (which wasn't true at all.)

You both grabbed your bags and began walking out the gates of your school, Coal Hill School.

Susan would keep asking you questions along the way, sometimes even very ordinary questions a girl her age should already known. You sometimes thought she might be an alien from some other planet as you laughed at the thought.

You both arrived at the mall as Susan spotted a music store "Oh... (Your Name), let's check this one out!" She exclaimed as you both ran into the store. It was filled with many different genere's of music from Pop to Metal.

Susan was really into pop music as she ran over to the pop music section. She began picking out her favorite pop music she was into right now which was "John Smith and the Common Men."

You began running over to your favorite genere of music and picked out your favorite band/singer. Susan returned to your side smiling happily.

"Of course you would get that." You smiled to her shaking your head. You knew her so well (Or so you thought) as she was your best friend.

"What are you getting (Your Name)?" Susan asked looking curiously.

You showed her what you were getting "I'm getting this."

"Oh...I've never heard of them before. Are they good?"

You nodded "Yes, I'll let you listen sometime."

You both went to the cash register to check out your items as Susan looked to you confused on what she should do. Though she was very advanced in things like physics and chemistry, she was never really good with money and never seemed to have any either.

"I'll pay for yours as well." You offered her.

"Oh, really? Thank you (Your Name.) Thank you!" Susan exclaimed to you with a bright smile as she hugged you.

You both left the music store and continued walking around the mall. You spotted a clothing shop as you grabbed Susan's hand running into it.

You found an adorable top as you put it to Susan to see how it would look on her. "Hmm...this seems to fit you perfectly. I'll get it for you."

Susan began to protest "Ah but (Your Name) you just bought my music for me, I'm okay without this. Besides I already have a whole big closet full of clothes at home." And she wasn't exagerrating there.

"Good, then you can add this one to your collection." You told her with a smile as you went to the register to buy it.

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You and Susan were laughing as you walked down the street to her house. You both arrived at a big house as Susan looked to you "Thank you (Your Name) for hanging with me and walking me home."

"No problem Susan." You smiled to her. "By the way, I like your house. We should hang out sometimes here."

Susan gave a nervous smile "Oh yes, good idea. While I should really be getting inside, my grandfather is impatient. Goodbye (Your Name.)"

You nodded to her and began walking away "Alright, see you tomorrow at school Susan!"

As you walked away you failed to notice she hadn't gone inside the house yet. Once you were out of sight she continued walking down the street until she reached a old junkyard with a sign that read "I.M Foreman, 76 Totter's Lane."

She entered the junkyard and walked up to a blue telephone poilce box as she entered it. People would be fooled by it as it was bigger on the inside and smaller on the outside.

She walked up to an old man who was her grandfather "Grandfather I'm back." She had her items you got her hidden in her school bag.

"Ah yes welcome home Susan." Her grandfather replied. Susan and her grandfather were both aliens, Time Lords from the planet called Gallifrey.

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You began laying in your bed as you thought over Susan. The ridiculous thought that she could be an alien poped into your head again. Yes she was very intelligent, especially for a girl her age. She would always ask you very ordinary questions everyone should already know.

You shook your head and laughed as you told yourself "There's no way she's an alien. Alien's don't exisit." Or so you thought.
Doctor Who Reader Insert: Susan Foreman, The Doctor's granddaughter and you are best friends. The thing is, you don't know your best friend is an alien. Susan Foreman x Teen Reader.

This was requested by Superpunksuperfunk on Tumblr. I'm up for taking Reader Insert requests.
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NinjaBrony817's avatar
This was fun! It would be cool if you made a part 2 where the reader learns that Susan was an alien. :P